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thoughts of Yávië - they lie in ten years of waiting

Poetical expressions of facets of the spirit of Ilsaluntë Valion
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thoughts of Yávië - they lie in ten years of waiting

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If this location is not the right place for this poem, please feel free to move it.
I hope you like this one.

::Arelinda Melfaroth::

Prince of Autumn Gold
written: October 9th, 2007
by: Melfaroth


The sighing of the autumn leaves
That glide upon the gentle breeze
Like to a song it whispers on
Beneath the gold October sun.

The trees beneath the mountain's wake
And eastward way the wind does take
To travel far up mountain's side
Toward high place where most be denied.

He walks with grace, his head held high
His antlers proud stretched toward the sky
He stops beaneath peace under tree
To view his realm that he may see.

I gaze in awe and strong eyes meet me.
His cool repose, it soon surrounds me.
His steaming breath in cool, crisp evening;
This breath of life soon disappearing.

I knew this sight some years ago
And only now do these words flow.
My love for Prince of Gold shall be
An everlasting part of me.
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Re: thoughts of Yávië - they lie in ten years of waiting

Post by Meneldur Olvarion »

Yes, this is the right place.  :)

And thanks, I really like this poem.  Strong imagery.

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Re: thoughts of Yávië - they lie in ten years of waiting

Post by Niennildi Oarnen »

I like the "song" of it too. (I know Aikanar really grooves on the rhythm of poetry such as this too. ;)
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